Original Script for our production

Scene one - train tracks Molly Diegetic sound: *heavy breathing*
Breathing continues to become heavier as she runs down the track and slowly fades quieter as she runs away from camera diegetic sound: *gasp* As she turns around and sees someone in the distance she gasps with fear. 
Diegetic sound: *falling against the floor* The sound created as she hits the floor

Cuts to flashback - the bar diegetic sound: Molly ‘ so are we going for some food then’ Friend ‘yes that would be great’ ... *phone rings* ‘oh! Just one moment’ *friend gets up and walks out* Hustle and bustle of bar and ‘sweet Caroline’ playing in the background

Cuts back to molly running down the track diegetic sound: Continuous diegetic noises of her running down the track and heavy breathing.