Once we began filming we decided that instead of having dialogue in our production (in the second scene), the ambiguity and mystery would be heightened if instead we blocked that out and had louder music with eerie sounds able to be heard in the background. We also changed to order of what happens when editing arrived, changing the end of the script completely.
UPDATED SCRIPT:
Scene one - train tracks
Molly
Diegetic sound:
*heavy breathing*
Breathing continues to become heavier as she
runs down the track and slowly fades quieter as she runs away from
camera diegetic sound:
*gasp*
As she turns around and sees someone in the distance she gasps with
fear.
Diegetic sound:
*falling against the floor*
The sound created as she hits the floor
Cuts to flashback - loud music running throughout- diegetic and coming from the pub they're in of 'Sweet Caroline'. As she exits the bar, we hear louder music that is more demanding and louder (non diegetic), suggesting something bad is going to happen.
Graphic match to the next scene with the whole of the diegetic music from the bar being cancelled out and replaced with the non-diegetic loud, siren-sounding music. The scene plays out and at the end we hear the diegetic sound of the axe cutting through the girl followed by a diegetic *scream*.
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